15 January 2009

haiku 1/15/09

the impotent sun
burns cold outside the window
winter afternoon

©2009-Art Belliveau

2 comments:

PoetLady said...

I really like your creative image of a "sun burning cold" Wow, what a perfect phrase and expression!

I'm glad to see you're writing more.

Maria

Art Belliveau said...

The writing more is comeing and going. I appreciate all your comments on these offerings. I liked the sun burning cold image too. The winter just seems like that to me. Old Sol is out there, he just doesn't seem to be getting a whole lot done.