02 May 2009

haiku 5/02/09

the roar of thunder
vibrates the store--rain cascades
I am safe inside

©2009-Art Belliveau

1 comment:

PoetLady said...

I find it interesting you are in a store during the poem.

I like your use of the words vibrates and cascades (cascades is much fresher than pours)

Great job, I don't know why you called it "really bad"!

Keep the poems coming:)

Maria