05 April 2011

senryu 04/05/11

a door is moving
it's opening or closing--
i just can't tell which

©2011-Art Belliveau

6 comments:

Maria Coble said...

Wow. This one really spoke to me. I feel this way too but didn't know how to say it.

Juice Box said...

It's hard to tell sometimes-- especially from a distance. The only way to know is to walk up to it and kick it. Hard.

lucychili said...

perhaps both =)

Art Belliveau said...

Probably both. That seems to be the way of the world, yes?

Anonymous said...

love this one.

divine.

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